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Released my first single today 08:28 - Jul 19 with 3221 viewstractordownsouth

Would appreciate it if people could have a little listen



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Released my first single today on 08:48 - Jul 19 with 2585 viewsWeWereZombies

OK, and you thwarted my comment about 'Maybe there is nothing the matter with Jasmin' at the final line. But I felt there was too much 'slap' on the drum sound (avoided the 'thunk' trap that a lot of 'modest' studios fall into though, drums are often the most difficult to record). Felt that something more was needed to sustain interest over repeated plays - strings? some electronica? Good that you have not prettied up the voice, hope that does not stop you getting some airplay.

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Released my first single today on 08:49 - Jul 19 with 2580 viewsMillsey

Good song 👍
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Released my first single today on 09:05 - Jul 19 with 2554 viewstractordownsouth

Released my first single today on 08:48 - Jul 19 by WeWereZombies

OK, and you thwarted my comment about 'Maybe there is nothing the matter with Jasmin' at the final line. But I felt there was too much 'slap' on the drum sound (avoided the 'thunk' trap that a lot of 'modest' studios fall into though, drums are often the most difficult to record). Felt that something more was needed to sustain interest over repeated plays - strings? some electronica? Good that you have not prettied up the voice, hope that does not stop you getting some airplay.


Thanks for the feedback, the studio I recorded in was a fairly good one, I’ve been saving up for a while... if you want to pay for me to do my next one Abbey Road then you’re more than welcome;) Glad you enjoyed the tune though:) rest of the EP’s out on 2nd August

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Released my first single today on 09:13 - Jul 19 with 2543 viewsGuthrum

Quite catchy, sounds like the kind of thing which would do well if enough people hear it. A bit of a summer/festival circuit tune (in the sense of one which you might expect to hear played there).

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Released my first single today on 09:41 - Jul 19 with 2511 viewsWeWereZombies

Released my first single today on 09:05 - Jul 19 by tractordownsouth

Thanks for the feedback, the studio I recorded in was a fairly good one, I’ve been saving up for a while... if you want to pay for me to do my next one Abbey Road then you’re more than welcome;) Glad you enjoyed the tune though:) rest of the EP’s out on 2nd August


Sorry, never even put my hand in my pocket enough to promote a gig let alone produce (also, much as I love listening to music I am completely useless as a musician - and I think a producer needs to be a good musician to appreciate what is possible, much like a football manager needs to have played the game to some degree of achievement). However, another thought on what could be overdubbed to give the single a boost if you need to re-release, it may sound singer/songwriter corny but done well and with restraint a harmonica can give the listener a motif to attune to and get in the mood of the writer.

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Released my first single today on 09:59 - Jul 19 with 2457 viewsMookamoo

Thought it was excellent.

Have you considered getting in touch with the John Peel Centre? They run an 'Emerge' night where they ask artists to send examples in an they then select four to play a new and emerging talent night. Its these bands that get asked to support the larger acts.
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Released my first single today on 12:06 - Jul 19 with 2361 viewsTVRBlue

I "have a nosey" on TWTD every day but very rarely actually log-in.

Today I've just listened to your first single and had to log-in to post how good I think it is.

I'm no musical expert so can't comment on how it was recorded but genuinely thinks its good, easy listening.

Nice one, and all the best for the future.
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Released my first single today on 12:14 - Jul 19 with 2347 viewsSuperblue95

So are you shooting for Ed Sheeran levels of fame or are you happy to settle for Tom Chaplin levels?

My hobbies include being quiet during trips, clapping with songs, and diabetes.
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Released my first single today on 12:16 - Jul 19 with 2340 viewsnodge_blue

I think the fact you've produced a song at all is something in itself. Its easy to knock people. You clearly have a talent. For me its a little bland and safe - but thats just my taste in music. Good luck to you.

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Released my first single today on 12:22 - Jul 19 with 2316 viewsSuperblue95

Released my first single today on 12:16 - Jul 19 by nodge_blue

I think the fact you've produced a song at all is something in itself. Its easy to knock people. You clearly have a talent. For me its a little bland and safe - but thats just my taste in music. Good luck to you.


“Its easy to knock people“

“For me its a little bland and safe”

Very easy for you apparently

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Released my first single today on 12:25 - Jul 19 with 2305 viewsfooters

Well done, mister- very nice :)

And what a handsome young man you are.

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Released my first single today on 12:26 - Jul 19 with 2301 viewsSuperblue95

Released my first single today on 12:25 - Jul 19 by footers

Well done, mister- very nice :)

And what a handsome young man you are.


I remember when you used to talk to me like that

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Released my first single today on 12:27 - Jul 19 with 2293 viewsfooters

Released my first single today on 12:26 - Jul 19 by Superblue95

I remember when you used to talk to me like that


Are you going to release a single or not? Fed up waiting now.

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Released my first single today on 12:30 - Jul 19 with 2283 viewsSuperblue95

Released my first single today on 12:27 - Jul 19 by footers

Are you going to release a single or not? Fed up waiting now.



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Released my first single today on 12:34 - Jul 19 with 2264 viewslowhouseblue

very good. well done you.

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Released my first single today on 12:40 - Jul 19 with 2239 viewsWeWereZombies

Released my first single today on 12:30 - Jul 19 by Superblue95



Ahh, yes, much better than my suggestion of strings or harmonica...

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Released my first single today on 12:41 - Jul 19 with 2233 viewsnodge_blue

Released my first single today on 12:22 - Jul 19 by Superblue95

“Its easy to knock people“

“For me its a little bland and safe”

Very easy for you apparently


well i probably left myself open to that comment.

Anyone who puts their music out for the public immediately opens themselves up to different opinions.

My honest feedback is that it doesnt stand out. Thats not to say its sh1te or that he should give up.

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Released my first single today on 12:56 - Jul 19 with 2188 viewsJ2BLUE

Released my first single today on 12:41 - Jul 19 by nodge_blue

well i probably left myself open to that comment.

Anyone who puts their music out for the public immediately opens themselves up to different opinions.

My honest feedback is that it doesnt stand out. Thats not to say its sh1te or that he should give up.


Completely agree. Good voice but the song isn't for me.

Good luck.

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Released my first single today on 12:59 - Jul 19 with 2176 viewsSuperblue95

Released my first single today on 12:41 - Jul 19 by nodge_blue

well i probably left myself open to that comment.

Anyone who puts their music out for the public immediately opens themselves up to different opinions.

My honest feedback is that it doesnt stand out. Thats not to say its sh1te or that he should give up.


Fair enough. But you probably could have left out the bland and safe comment as it’s not exactly constructive criticism like other posters gave him

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Released my first single today on 13:05 - Jul 19 with 2161 viewsColin_Viljoen

I would recommend something along the lines of "My name is Edward Ebenezer Jerimiah Brown"
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Released my first single today on 13:13 - Jul 19 with 2147 viewsReuser_is_God

Decent that, much better than the sh1te any other musicians have posted on here.

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Released my first single today on 13:18 - Jul 19 with 2125 viewstractordownsouth

Thanks for the feedback...

As for the bland and safe comment, I usually create indie/ pop music which isn’t completely unique but i’m big and ugly enough to take it ( despite Footers advances;) ) I don’t mind the odd bit of criticism of course, that’s part of putting your music out there:)

Cheers for giving it a listen to everyone.

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Released my first single today on 13:21 - Jul 19 with 2112 viewsfooters

Released my first single today on 13:18 - Jul 19 by tractordownsouth

Thanks for the feedback...

As for the bland and safe comment, I usually create indie/ pop music which isn’t completely unique but i’m big and ugly enough to take it ( despite Footers advances;) ) I don’t mind the odd bit of criticism of course, that’s part of putting your music out there:)

Cheers for giving it a listen to everyone.


You should ask a label for an advance, not me.

Just a bit of 'insider' know-how.

Although I'll slip something in your pocket if you like.

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Released my first single today on 13:21 - Jul 19 with 2112 viewsJ2BLUE

Released my first single today on 12:59 - Jul 19 by Superblue95

Fair enough. But you probably could have left out the bland and safe comment as it’s not exactly constructive criticism like other posters gave him


Get a grip, you're being way oversensitive.

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Released my first single today on 13:27 - Jul 19 with 2095 viewsSuperblue95

Released my first single today on 13:21 - Jul 19 by J2BLUE

Get a grip, you're being way oversensitive.


Not being sensitive at all, just giving my opinion. It may not be his cup of tea which is perfectly fine, it’s not mine either.

But calling it bland just seems a bit of a needless dig is all.

Feel free to disagree with me by all means

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