| Keno's not very good sonnet 14:47 - Jun 28 with 672 views | Keno |
with apologies to Will Shakespeare who graced as at the home of the bard
How do we compare thee to a yesterdays team
That was able to fulfil that of which we dream
it may be much to ask for you to reach that height
but all we ask is really? must you be so sh1te?
We’ve witnessed so much on Portman’s lawn
but by comparison todays team is so forlorn
oh to see a team playing with soul and full of heart
achieving things much better than the sum of the part
we seem to lack that person leading from the top
to bring through and galvanise a promising young crop
we surely should be aiming so much higher
where is the man who us will inspire
There is one hope we can share, next season starts a flyer
So Evans act, sack Paul Lambert and appoint Kieron Dyer
[Post edited 28 Jun 2020 19:25]
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| Keno's not very good sonnet on 14:52 - Jun 28 with 638 views | factual_blue |
I think you're two lines short of a sonnet.... |  |
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| Keno's not very good sonnet on 14:53 - Jun 28 with 637 views | Darth_Koont |
Booo. That's a stanza (although a good one). |  |
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| Keno's not very good sonnet on 14:58 - Jun 28 with 610 views | Keno |
| Keno's not very good sonnet on 14:52 - Jun 28 by factual_blue |
I think you're two lines short of a sonnet.... |
I’ve been called a few things but that’s a new one | |
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| Keno's not very good sonnet on 15:08 - Jun 28 with 600 views | ghostofescobar |
Yes, there's love if you want it
Don't sound like no sonnet, my lord |  |
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| Keno's not very good sonnet on 18:15 - Jun 28 with 550 views | WeWereZombies |
| Keno's not very good sonnet on 14:53 - Jun 28 by Darth_Koont |
Booo. That's a stanza (although a good one). |
Three to be precise, maybe Keno is working on the closing couplet
Not sure I can see the volta in the third stanza.
[edit] Actually I guess the volta is the change to who the manager is and the plea to change that. [Post edited 28 Jun 2020 18:16]
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| Keno's not very good sonnet on 19:26 - Jun 28 with 519 views | Keno |
| Keno's not very good sonnet on 18:15 - Jun 28 by WeWereZombies |
Three to be precise, maybe Keno is working on the closing couplet
Not sure I can see the volta in the third stanza.
[edit] Actually I guess the volta is the change to who the manager is and the plea to change that. [Post edited 28 Jun 2020 18:16]
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Ive added a couplet for Zomie
I never this peotry malarkey was so technical
My quill is all a quivver | |
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